My Speech

 WALT present a persuasive speech.

What i did well was making a plan and writing to be able to get my speech in between one fifty and

What i need to work on for next time learn my speech off by heart with out cue cards.

What was i feeling overall about your speech experience i was so scared because i thought that i was not going to get top five.

Would you like your teeth to fall out because you drink fizzy drinks? I sure wouldn't so that’s why I am going to tell you why I think fizzy drinks should be banned. I think fizzy should be banned because two fifths of kids under five in North land and Auckland have tooth decay. Fizzy if full of sugar. If you drink too much, you’ll get rotten teeth and you only have two sets of teeth. It costs a lot of money to go to the dentist. Did you know that one can of coke has ten teaspoons of sugar!!! Do you like eating apples, because if your teeth are rotten your teeth will fall out and then that means that you can not eat any more!!! Sugary drinks so bad for your teeth! It is so cheap that kids buy it instead of water and milk but I think kids should only drink water and milk. I think fizzy should be banned because diabetes and child obesity is a major problem in NZ. Heart disease is the number one disease in NZ that takes lives. Heart disease is caused by too much sugar and fat. Fizzy can cause other health issues too. When my dad has a red bull he gets gout that means that his foot starts to hurt and he can not walk on his foot. I think fizzy should be banned because they have a lot of plastic rubbish that ends up in our oceans that will kill the fish and will end the circle of life. Fish will not be able to clean the bottom of the ocean and the environment will die.There is a lot of plastic in fizzy packaging. Plastic is really bad for the environment. Did you know that by the year 2050, scientists think that there will be more plastic in the ocean than fish around the world. Fizzy makes your teeth rot, it’s bad for your health and causes diseases like heart disease and diabetes and it is mostly packaged in plastic. These are the reasons why I think fizzy should be banned.