22 September 2021
WALT: Express myself in Narrative Writing
On a sunny day there was a blue bus and inside it was Billy the angry bus driver. Billy has straight brown hair, for a job Billy takes one person every day to take on a ride In different jungles. The story today is Rose, she is sixteen years old and loves adventures. What they don’t know is that there is a dark red dragon that doesn’t know how to fly and can breathe fire. Because of that dragon they are lost.
Lost
Billy was driving his blue bus through the roads of a mystical forest where there were Pohutukawa trees and Phoenix Palms grew. When they were further in the forest Rose kept seeing a red flash out her window and yelled “There's something out there!” Billy replied “There's nothing out there.” Then bam a big red dragon breathed fire on the front window. The window was as black as coal. Billy could not see where he was going. He pushed on the brakes as hard as he could but the brakes didn’t work so they crashed into a tree. Rose and Billy got out of the bus and walked and walked and walked. But all of the walking and they turned up to the dragon cave and asked “Can you take us home?” Yes I can. So off the dragon flue with Billy and Rose on her back. After that the dragon was never seen again.
Billy is still angry, Rose had the time of her life and the dragon had her jungle all to herself. I would have been terrified to be in that bus when the window was black. How would you of felt?
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