w10 writing

 Monday 27.9 2021

WALT: Add descriptive features to my Narrative

Once upon a time there was a cheetah named Coco. She had the brightest  yellow coat  and the darkest black spots. Coco has a kitten named Meme. She has a soft white coat with little black  spots.  Meme and Coco lived on a tropical island 800 miles out of New Zealand. That Tropical island is called Te tree. Te tree as white sand beaches with the most lovely coconut trees and pineapple bushes. But on day a stranger named Lulu turned up at there Tetree trying to find a  time machine that was hidden. 

Time traveller

When Meme was playing in the waves she spotted an elephant  on a raft. The elephant on the raft slowly drifted in. When she was on the beach Coco and Meme were there to greet the elephant. The elephant told them “ my name is Lulu and I am here to find a time travelling  machine.” “ there are no time travelling machines on my island.” Coco replied. Lulu looked in the bushes and looked at vines and  in  the sand. It was nowhere to be seen.  Meme knew where it was so she took Lulu to it. Meme had it in her hut this whole time. 

In the end

 Lulu owned a business that takes people back in time. Meme  and Coco have their island back.