The three funny friends

 Success Criteria:

I have proof-read my writing to ensure I have:

• Juicy sentence starters

• Correct punctuation - Capital letters, full stops, commas, speech marks, exclamation and question marks.

• A speech conversation in the body of my writing

• A simile in the body of my writing

• Read my writing to ensure it makes sense.

14 September 2021

WALT:  Follow the sequence of Narrative writing

Title: The Three Funny Friends.

 

introduction

Milley is a snow white friendly mouse that loves playing with long green  leaves .  Kooch is a brindle dog that loves  playing fetch with  fat  sticks.  Champion is a coal black horse and he  loves the look of  brick houses .  They are all neighbours and really good friends who each want to build their own homes to live in. Farmer is a family friend and the Woodsman lives deep in the forest.  Wolf is a really bad wolf who loves to blow down houses.

House 

Milley, Kooch and Champion were slowly walking down the road looking for the most fantastic materials they could use to build their homes. Milley spotted a Farmer taking his leaves away from his home so Milley asked "May I please have some of your leaves to make my house?" "Sure you can, little mouse." Replied the farmer. Milley yelled "I am going to make my house out of long bales of leaves!" Champion was thinking that the house want be that strong. They walk on more Then Kooch declares "we are going to the wood company!" When they arrived at the wood company Kooch asked  "Can I have some sticks to make my House?" The brightly dressed worker declared "yes you may " Milley went and built her house and Kooch went to do his house. While Milley and Kooch were building their homes, Champion went to get some red bricks.by the time Champion had done two walls Kooch and Milley were done. They were faster than a cheetah. It took Champion three hours to finish his brick house.

Problem

The next day  the big bad wolf knocked on Milleys door and  yelled “Little friend little friend let me in!” Milley replied,”Not by the hair on my chinny chin chin. “Then I’ll huff and I’ll puff and I’ll blow your house down” replied the wolf. Milley ran to Kooch house made of sticks. Soon the wolf arrived. Once more the wolf yelled little friends, little friends let me in. Not by the  hairs on our chinny chin chin. Then I’ll huff and I’ll puff and I’ll blow your house down. They ran to Champions house.

The end 

The wolf was at Champion's brick house Once again he yelled little friends, little friends let me in. not by the hair on my chinny chin chins. Then I’ll huff and I’ll puff and I’ll blow your house down. He huffed and puffed as hard as he could. He got the leaves off the trees but didn’t blow down the house. Wolf thought to himself I’ll go down the chimney. Down he went and into the pot of soup never to be seen again.   

      Self assessment 

• I liked using my creativity. 

• I learnt how to use speech conversations 

• I liked writing what I wanted.